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1Syndra's Pet Yury Empty Syndra's Pet Yury on Sat Jun 18, 2016 1:56 pm

Syndra


Syndra
Name: Yury
Species:  Bear
Tier: 1
Description:
It looks like a cute doggie with white hair and some black spots but is actually a bear. Some peopel do not see that and might say itas a doggie but its a bear. It is loyal and listens good to Syndra. It got strong teeth and claws to attack his master's enemies.. He is still in his infinant stage so he is still small..  Yury is a special kind of bear that doesnt grow really big. He is smalla nd got white hair and black spots.
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Special Characteristics: N/A None
Specs: Animal Tamer
Haki:  Busoshoku.
History:
Yury first was found by the scientist who found the Yury as a baby in a bear cave abandond and left for dead by its parents. The scientist took yury home and fed it. He found Yury on the island of Amazon Lilly. Thus being born there he had the abilty just like his parents to use the haki "Busoshoku."  Because his parents died before he could learn it  he still doesnt know that he got this. The baby bear did grow in strength and ages and startted growing. Luckily Yury was a small bear kind. The scientist felt relieved because he wasnt really int he mood to have a 2meters big bear in his house in the near future. Orlando took care of the bear and used his knowledge to take good care of the bear. He tames the bear who starts to gets attached to his owner and gets a nick name Yury.  The bear lives a good life with his owner and becomes reallyloyal.  

One day the scientist came back with a little girl after being gone for a few days. SHe was wounded and didnt seem to be alive to him A half year later he withneseed a mirracle as Yury saw the girl walk around in the building. Yury wa interested in  the new person his owner brought to the island. Would she stay with them for long? Can she be trusted?  The girl saw him and  as time passed by the two spend alot of their time together. The first few days he was really distaned. As time passed he got used to being her around. The scientist had a usual habit of locking himself in this labratory for hours. Usualy Yury would be bored but now Syndrawas around his days became more enjoyable. He didnt know aboutthe robotic side of the woman and was suprised to find out. It didnt scare him off. Yury followed her around everywhere and rthe two got really attached to eachoter. They couldnt be seperated anymore.  They played togeter and Yury learned her to fight since he was a bear he liked to fight playfully with her. It made them both stronger. Sometyimes for some weird reason his skin would get tough like Iron because of the haki he possesed. Neither of the two knew how or what. They didnt inform Orlando becuase they ddint bother about it. It was kidn of awesome. He was born with the haki but tilll now he doesnt know about it.

Years passed by and the scientist Orlando got murdered when he and Syndra were away fishing. From that moment Syndra became his new owner and he still follows her around like her loyal pet and friend. Yury felt bad about losing his old owner and decided to protect his new owner. Now it was jsut the two of them and he would follow her anywhere.



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2Syndra's Pet Yury Empty Re: Syndra's Pet Yury on Mon Jun 20, 2016 3:35 am

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@Syndra wrote:Name: Yury
Species:  Bear
Tier: 1
Description:
It looks like a cute doggie with white hair and some black spots but is actually a bear. Some peopel do not see that and might say itas a doggie but its a bear. It is loyal and listens good to Syndra. It got strong teeth and claws to attack his master's enemies.
Pets start at Tier 1 in their infant stages pretty much. This pet won't be a fully grown bear right away.
Special Characteristics: N/A
Specs: Animal Tamer
Haki:  Busoshoku.
History:
Yury first was found by the scientist who found the Yury as a babay in a bear cave abandond and left for dead by its parents. The scientist took yury home and fed it. The baby bear did grow in strenggth and ages and startted growing. The scientist didnt like the growing part  because  it would eb troublesome if Yury would be 2meter. So the scientist used a liquid on him to stop the bear from aging its body. That does not make any sense.
This allowed Yury to stay small. The bear lives a good life with his owner and gets loyal like a doggie.

One day the scientist came back with a little girl. SHe was wounded and didnt seem to make it. A half year later he withneseed a mirracle as Yury saw the girl walk around in the building. The girl saw him and as time passed by the two spend alot of their time together. Yury followed her aroudnand they played togeter. He learned her to wrestle since hwas a bear he liked to fight playfully with her.

Years passed by and the scientist got murdered when he and Syndra were away fishing. Fromthat moment Syndra became his new owner and he still follows her around like her loyal pet and friend. Yury felt bad about losing his old owner and decided to protect his new owner.

Syndra wanted him to be able to protect himself and didnt want to lose him too so he learned how to use Busoshoku and Syndra gave him   devilfruit wich gave him the power to change his size. If this pet is going to have a Fruit ability, you are going to have to claim the fruit first and have it approved, it also needs to be a T1 fruit otherwise you will have to Arc for it.

Spoiler:

Yury got a devilfruit power that allows him to change sizes. He can become a big enormous bear or be smaller or being his ususal size what allows Syndra to easily carry him around.

Generally, if it's included in the history, you have to describe it better, you don't just learn/teach someone (or an animal) Haki out of the blue, especial not without knowing it yourself. Same goes for a devil fruit, you'll have to explain where you got that, they don't just magically appear. All in all, you'll probably want to refine this history as a whole if you want to add these things, or make it a simpler pet.


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3Syndra's Pet Yury Empty Re: Syndra's Pet Yury on Thu Jul 14, 2016 12:27 pm

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@Iris van Valkenburgh wrote:
@Syndra wrote:Name: Yury
Species:  Bear
Tier: 1
Description:
It looks like a cute doggie with white hair and some black spots but is actually a bear. Some peopel do not see that and might say itas a doggie but its a bear. It is loyal and listens good to Syndra. It got strong teeth and claws to attack his master's enemies.
Pets start at Tier 1 in their infant stages pretty much. This pet won't be a fully grown bear right away.
Special Characteristics: N/A
You don't wanna go with any SCs?
Specs: Animal Tamer
Animal Tamer?
Haki:  Busoshoku.
History:
Yury first was found by the scientist who found the Yury as a babay in a bear cave abandond and left for dead by its parents. The scientist took yury home and fed it. The baby bear did grow in strenggth and ages and startted growing. The scientist didnt like the growing part  because  it would eb troublesome if Yury would be 2meter. So the scientist used a liquid on him to stop the bear from aging its body. That does not make any sense.
This allowed Yury to stay small. The bear lives a good life with his owner and gets loyal like a doggie.

One day the scientist came back with a little girl. SHe was wounded and didnt seem to make it. A half year later he withneseed a mirracle as Yury saw the girl walk around in the building. The girl saw him and as time passed by the two spend alot of their time together. Yury followed her aroudnand they played togeter. He learned her to wrestle since hwas a bear he liked to fight playfully with her.

Years passed by and the scientist got murdered when he and Syndra were away fishing. Fromthat moment Syndra became his new owner and he still follows her around like her loyal pet and friend. Yury felt bad about losing his old owner and decided to protect his new owner.

Syndra wanted him to be able to protect himself and didnt want to lose him too so he learned how to use Busoshoku and Syndra gave him   devilfruit wich gave him the power to change his size. If this pet is going to have a Fruit ability, you are going to have to claim the fruit first and have it approved, it also needs to be a T1 fruit otherwise you will have to Arc for it.

Spoiler:

Yury got a devilfruit power that allows him to change sizes. He can become a big enormous bear or be smaller or being his ususal size what allows Syndra to easily carry him around.

Generally, if it's included in the history, you have to describe it better, you don't just learn/teach someone (or an animal) Haki out of the blue, especial not without knowing it yourself. Same goes for a devil fruit, you'll have to explain where you got that, they don't just magically appear. All in all, you'll probably want to refine this history as a whole if you want to add these things, or make it a simpler pet.

5Syndra's Pet Yury Empty Re: Syndra's Pet Yury on Thu Jul 14, 2016 12:35 pm

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