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1Hasshoken Unchain {Done} Empty Hasshoken Unchain {Done} on Tue Dec 13, 2016 10:33 am

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"Shockwaves"



The Crippler

Priority:Secondary
Fighting Style: Martial Art
Skill Set Name: Hasshoken
Skill Set Information:Hasshoken is a fighting style allows the user to control vibrations around their limbs to generate shock. This shock is powerful enough to destroy a metal shield or defeat a strong man easily. It is also claimed that these attacks are unblockable and reverberating, causing defenses to shatter. This fighting style can be utilized on any limb of the user's body, whether it be the head, fists, legs, or elbows.
Passives:

  • Shatter: One of Hasshoken is the ability  to shatter equipment same tier equipment .  Kronus is able to shatter or break Equipment made of materials the user can partially completely destroy breaks from one hit as opposed to three per the Equipment System. i.e. if Iron is completely destroyed or partially  at Tier 1, then a Tier 1 Skill would break an iron sword in one strike as opposed to three.


  • Breaker of Defense : Due to Kronus being an Hasshoken User.  An Hasshoken users are known for breaking or shattering  defense techniques.  Kronus had develop an passive which allow him to break same tier defense technique. i.e. if the defense technique is Tier 1, then a Tier 1 Skill would break the defense  technique regardless if it can withstand an tier 2 output.


  • Longer Range: Kronus have developed a natural ability which allows him to increase the range of his some of his techniques. How by simply adding more shockwaves to his attacks . He can extend the range of any of his shockwaves base abilities  by 5 meters in radius. Unfortunately this cost him 10 stamina per technique use. Common sense applies to this technique.



Skillset Strengths:

  • All attacks attacks that is perform in water gets an +5m in all direction .

  • Kronus received  an +1 tier in the destruction chart when hitting equipment.

Skillset Weaknesses:

  • The skills of the set are untamed. Meaning that once used, it will affect anything within vicinity. So, foes and friends alike will be hit due to the vibrations and shocks.

  • Yes majority of the shockwaves are visible be can be seen by Haki, and other environment conditions. Example if Kronus release an attack on sand you will see the dirt flying giving the foes a glint of the attack. Not to mention the shockwaves take the appearance of circles of concentrate wind{Like Picture }.


MDC:


  • Tier 1:
    Completely Destroyed -Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
    Partially Destroyed -
    Lightly Damaged - Iron

  • Tier 2:
    Completely Destroyed -Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
    Partially Destroyed - Iron
    Lightly Damaged - Steel

    Tier 3:
    Completely Destroyed - Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
    Partially Destroyed -Steel
    Lightly Damaged -

    Tier 4:
    Completely Destroyed - Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
    Partially Destroyed -
    Lightly Damaged - Titanium

    Tier 5:
    Completely Destroyed - Titanium, Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
    Partially Destroyed -
    Lightly Damaged - Treasure Tree Adam

    Tier 6:
    Completely Destroyed - Titanium, Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
    Partially Destroyed - Treasure Tree Adam
    Lightly Damaged - Seastone

Notes:

Attribute Priorities:


*Primary Attribute: Speed
*Secondary Attribute: Perception
*Non-Prioritized Attributes:
Strength, and Durability




Tier 1 Skills:

Skill Name: Hasshoken  Quake
Tier: 1
Type Normal
Range: 10m
Speed: Self
Description:Kronus stomps his feet on the ground creating an vibrations all through ground. This shockwave is able to travel through water and cause waves{10meters in radius}. Strong enough to destroy a really small portion of a town. The ground around the user begins to be completely destroyed (the distance it travel is 10meters in radius).  Although the ground directly below the user is safe from harm. The damage of this attack can break bones of anyone who is near this attack as well as send them back 10 meters. If perform Just like any other shockwave being hit by an shockwave harm you in both internal , and external. The damage is follow the damage broken bones, and bruise organs which can lead to internal bleeding it can't damage objects not connected to the ground.But he can only what is in the direct vicinity of the shockwave technique.

Skill Name: Hasshoken Iron Body
Tier: 1
Type Defensive
Range: Self
Speed: Self
Description: Kronus is able to release a consist  shockwave through out his body. The shockwaves act as an shield that protect the user body form  physical  attacks .(Two attacks of the same tier, or one tier 2. )This defensive ability only work on those who make contact which him acting as an perfect shield . Those who clashes with this shield is subject to being harm by both internal , and external. The damage is follow the damage broken bones, and bruise organs which can lead to internal bleeding. He is able to move while using this technique.

Skill Name: Hasshoken Hit
Tier: 1
Type Normal
Range: Self
Speed: Self
Description: Kronus release an a  very powerful shockwave from any limb of his body. This shockwave move forward in the general direction of target{Whatever object or person he hits}. It can travel the radius of 10 meters, and is capable of both internal , and external. The damage is follow the damage broken bones, and bruise organs which can lead to internal bleeding.

Tier 2 Skills:

Skill Name: Hasshoken Iron Body Lv2
Tier: 2
Type Defensive
Range: Self
Speed: Self
Description:Kronus is able to release a consist  shockwave through out his body. The shockwaves act as an shield that protect the user body form  physical  attacks, and some elemental attacks  .(Two attacks of the same tier, one tier 3, and three tier ones. )This defensive ability only work on those who make contact which him acting as an perfect shield . Those who clashes with this shield is subject to being harm by both internal , and external. The damage is follow the damage broken bones, and bruise organs which can lead to internal bleeding. He is able to move while using this technique.



Skill Name: Hasshoken Hit Lv2
Tier: 2
Type Normal
Range: Self
Speed: 3
Description:Kronus release an a  very powerful shockwave from any limb of his body. This shockwave move forward in the general direction of target{Whatever object or person he hits}. It can travel the radius of 18 meters, and is capable of both internal , and external. The damage is follow the damage broken bones, and bruise organs which can lead to internal bleeding.


Skill Name:Hasshoken  Quake Lv2
Tier: 2
Type Normal
Range: 18m
Speed: Self
Description:Kronus stumps his feet on the ground. Creating vibrations all through it. Able to travel through water and cause waves. Strong enough to destroy a really small portion of a town. The ground around the user begins to be completely destroyed ( this attack release an 18 meters radius shockwave).  Although the ground directly below the user is safe from harm. The damage of this attack can break bones of anyone who is near this attack as well as send them back 18 meters. Just like any other shockwave being hit by an shockwave harm you in both internal , and external. The damage is follow the damage broken bones, and bruise organs which can lead to internal bleeding. This attacks get an additional 0.5 in the destruction chart. This  can't damage objects not connected to the ground. But only what is in the direct vicinity of the shockwave technique.

Tier 3 Skills:

Skill Name: -
Tier: -
Type -
Range: -
Speed: -
Description: -

Skill Name: -
Tier: -
Type -
Range: -
Speed: -
Description: -

Tier 4 Skills:

Skill Name: -
Tier: -
Type -
Range: -
Speed: -
Description: -







Last edited by Fallen on Thu Dec 15, 2016 9:49 am; edited 14 times in total

2Hasshoken Unchain {Done} Empty Re: Hasshoken Unchain {Done} on Wed Dec 14, 2016 11:51 am

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Love Tap I'm gonna consider that Tier 2 worthy as far as passive goes, and the rest is tier 1 worthy. Ready for staff to review this skillset please.

3Hasshoken Unchain {Done} Empty Re: Hasshoken Unchain {Done} on Wed Dec 14, 2016 11:56 am

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4Hasshoken Unchain {Done} Empty Re: Hasshoken Unchain {Done} on Wed Dec 14, 2016 8:10 pm

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Fallen wrote:





"Shockwaves"



The Crippler

Priority:Secondary
Fighting Style: Martial Art
Skill Set Name: Hasshoken
Skill Set Information:Hasshoken is a fighting style allows the user to control vibrations around their limbs to generate shock. This shock is powerful enough to destroy a metal shield or defeat a strong man easily. It is also claimed that these attacks are unblockable and reverberating, causing defenses to shatter. This fighting style can be utilized on any limb of the user's body, whether it be the head, fists, legs, or elbows.
Passives:

  • Love Tap: This passive allow Kronus to release fairly strong Shock waves from basic attacks or increase the range, height, and width of already shockwave base attacks. These attack are created by the user limbs vibrating them together to creature waves of shockwaves or natural making contact which objects. Nah, this is basically a skill without any stamina cost. So no shock waves with basic strikes, no debate. Maybe try to make a mode that allows that or something, but not a passive. The rest of the passive also doesn't make sense. Why are you able to increase the range, height, and width of the shock waves?




  • Natural Durability: Due to Kronus being an Hasshoken User his body have to incredibility durable in order to release  such attacks at this level.  His get +1 durability. Hasshoken doesn't grant you a boost to durability; where did you even get that from.


  • Enhance Strength: Due to Kronus being Hasshoken user .It takes incredible level of strength, and speed to release an shockwave. Kronus is given a +1 tier strength. He can increase his strength once after  two turn cool down this doesn't stack.  Same with the other comment. I don't see why you think you are getting a boost in tiers from just creating shock waves, that has nothing to do with Hasshoken.



Skillset Strengths:

  • All attacks are invisible. Due to them being shockwaves and vibrations. Jordan2 You even got a gif that shows you can see the ripples in the air when the attack is used. So oh nah, get a new strentgh.

Skillset Weaknesses:

  • The skills of the set are untamed. Meaning that once used, it will affect anything within vicinity. So, foes and friends alike will be hit due to the vibrations and shocks.

  • Yes majority of the shockwaves are invisible be can be seen by Haki, and other environment conditions. Example if Kronus release an attack on sand you will see the dirt flying giving the foes a glint of the attack. . You can get rid of this.


MDC:


  • Tier 1:
    Completely Destroyed -Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
    Partially Destroyed -
    Lightly Damaged - Iron

  • Tier 2:
    Completely Destroyed -Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
    Partially Destroyed - Iron
    Lightly Damaged - Steel

    Tier 3:
    Completely Destroyed - Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
    Partially Destroyed -Steel
    Lightly Damaged -

    Tier 4:
    Completely Destroyed - Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
    Partially Destroyed -
    Lightly Damaged - Titanium
    Tier 5:
    Completely Destroyed - Titanium, Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
    Partially Destroyed -
    Lightly Damaged - Treasure Tree Adam

    Tier 6:
    Completely Destroyed - Titanium, Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
    Partially Destroyed - Treasure Tree Adam
    Lightly Damaged - Seastone


Love Tap Chart:

*Tier 1: Kronus is able to release 4meters{In length, width, and height} shockwave from basic strikes or increase an already shockwave base attack. This cost 10 stamina per use of this passive.

*Tier 2: Kronus is able to release 9 meters{In length, width, and height} shockwave from basic strikes or increase an already shockwave base attack. This cost 25 stamina per use of this passive.


*Tier 3: Kronus is able to release 14meters{In length, width, and height} shockwave from basic strikes or increase an already shockwave base attack. This cost 35 stamina per use of this passive.



Oh, okay you do have stamina cost. But, that doesn't mean I am taking back what I said about this passive. As this is still just a skill.

Hasshoken is unshockable and used to break defenses, focus on that. Make your passive like +1 in damage when used on equipment or something like that. Boosting your tiers isn't what Hasshoken does. So focus a bit more on breaking defenses.




Notes:
Attribute Priorities:


*Primary Attribute: Speed
*Secondary Attribute: Perception
*Non-Prioritized Attributes:
Strength, and Durability




Tier 1 Skills:

Skill Name: Hasshoken  Quake
Tier: 1
Type Normal
Range: 10m
Speed: Self
Description:Kronus stumps his feet on the ground. Creating vibrations all through it. Able to travel through water and cause waves. Strong enough to destroy a really small portion of a town. The ground around the user begins to be completely destroyed ( this attack is 5 meters deep, and spread in the diameter of 10 meters).  Although the ground directly below the user is safe from harm. The damage of this attack can break bones of anyone who is near this attack as well as send them back 10 meters. Just like any other shockwave being hit by an shockwave harm you in both internal , and external. The damage is follow the damage broken bones, and bruise organs which can lead to internal bleeding.

How big are these waves you can create when in water? The ground directly below you shouldn't be untouched. And since you are sending this shock wave through the ground wouldn't it only harm those connected to the ground? The shock wave traveling through the ground would only be harming the legs, or whatever body part, is in contact with ground.

Skill Name: Hasshoken Iron Body
Tier: 1
Type Defensive
Range: Self
Speed: Self
Description: Kronus is able to release a consist  shockwave through out his body. The shockwaves act as an shield that protect the user body form  any attacks of the out of 2. This defensive ability only work on those who make contact which him acting as an perfect shield . Those who clashes with this shield is subject to being harm by both internal , and external. The damage is follow the damage broken bones, and bruise organs which can lead to internal bleeding. He is able to move while using this technique.

Not any attack, only physical attacks. Maybe at a higher tier you can increase what all it can block and how much it can block. Also put two attacks of the same tier, or one tier 2.

Skill Name: Hasshoken Hit
Tier: 1
Type Normal
Range: Self
Speed: Self
Description: Kronus release an a  very powerful shockwave from any limb of his body. This shockwave move forward in the general direction of target{Whatever object or person he hits}. It can travel the length of 10 meters, 5m in height, and is 5 meters wide this attack is capable of both internal , and external. The damage is follow the damage broken bones, and bruise organs which can lead to internal bleeding. This attacks get an 0.5 boost in the destruction chart

Get rid of the boost.


After the edits on everything I pointed out, I will go on to the rest of your skills.

Tier 2 Skills:

Skill Name: Hasshoken Iron Body Lv2
Tier: 2
Type Defensive
Range: Self
Speed: Self
Description:Kronus is able to release a consist  shockwave through out his body. The shockwaves act as an shield that protect the user body form  any attacks of the out of 3. This defensive ability only work on those who make contact which him acting as an perfect shield . Those who clashes with this shield is subject to being harm by both internal , and external. The damage is follows the MDC chart so several broken bones, and badly injured organs which can lead to internal bleeding. He is able to move while using this technique. Since this technique is defense base techniques for those techniques that is already an defensive technique it stacks by 0.5 to defense.



Skill Name: Hasshoken Hit Lv2
Tier: 2
Type Normal
Range: Self
Speed: 3
Description:Kronus release an a  very powerful shockwave from any limb of his body. This shockwave move forward in the general direction of target{Whatever object or person he hits}. It can travel the length of 18 meters, 7m in height, and is 7 meters wide this attack is capable of both internal , and external. The damage is follow the damage broken bones, and bruise organs which can lead to internal bleeding.


Skill Name: Hasshoken  Quake Lv2
Tier: 2
Type Normal
Range: 18m
Speed: Self
Description:Kronus stumps his feet on the ground. Creating vibrations all through it. Able to travel through water and cause waves. Strong enough to destroy a really small portion of a town. The ground around the user begins to be completely destroyed ( this attack is 8 meters deep, 8 meters tall, and spread in the diameter of 18 meters).  Although the ground directly below the user is safe from harm. The damage of this attack can break bones of anyone who is near this attack as well as send them back 18 meters. Just like any other shockwave being hit by an shockwave harm you in both internal , and external. The damage is follow the damage broken bones, and bruise organs which can lead to internal bleeding. This attacks get an additional 0.5 in the destruction chart.

Tier 3 Skills:

Skill Name: -
Tier: -
Type -
Range: -
Speed: -
Description: -

Skill Name: -
Tier: -
Type -
Range: -
Speed: -
Description: -

Tier 4 Skills:

Skill Name: -
Tier: -
Type -
Range: -
Speed: -
Description: -





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5Hasshoken Unchain {Done} Empty Re: Hasshoken Unchain {Done} on Thu Dec 15, 2016 4:43 am

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Done senior!

6Hasshoken Unchain {Done} Empty Re: Hasshoken Unchain {Done} on Thu Dec 15, 2016 8:01 am

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Titan.
Fallen wrote:





"Shockwaves"



The Crippler

Priority:Secondary
Fighting Style: Martial Art
Skill Set Name: Hasshoken
Skill Set Information:Hasshoken is a fighting style allows the user to control vibrations around their limbs to generate shock. This shock is powerful enough to destroy a metal shield or defeat a strong man easily. It is also claimed that these attacks are unblockable and reverberating, causing defenses to shatter. This fighting style can be utilized on any limb of the user's body, whether it be the head, fists, legs, or elbows.
Passives:

  • Shatter: One of Hasshoken is the ability  to shatter equipment same tier equipment .  Kronus is able to shatter or break Equipment made of materials the user can partially completely destroy breaks from one hit as opposed to three per the Equipment System. i.e. if Iron is completely destroyed or partially  at Tier 1, then a Tier 1 Skill would break an iron sword in one strike as opposed to three.


  • Breaker of Defense : Due to Kronus being an Hasshoken User.  An Hasshoken users are known for breaking or shattering  defense techniques.  Kronus had develop an passive which allow him to break same tier defense technique. i.e. if the defense technique is Tier 1, then a Tier 1 Skill would break the defense  technique regardless if it can withstand an tier 2 output.


  • Longer Range: Kronus have developed a natural ability which allows him to increase the range of his some of his techniques. How by simply adding more shockwaves to his attacks . He can extend the range of any of his shockwaves base abilities  by 10 meters in length, 5 meters in height, and  5 meters width. Unfortunately this cost him 15 stamina per technique use. Common sense applies to this technique.



Skillset Strengths:

  • All attacks attacks that is perform in water gets an +1 tier in the destruction chart. why is this?

  • Kronus received  an +1 tier in the destruction chart when hitting equipment.

Skillset Weaknesses:

  • The skills of the set are untamed. Meaning that once used, it will affect anything within vicinity. So, foes and friends alike will be hit due to the vibrations and shocks.

  • Yes majority of the shockwaves are visible be can be seen by Haki, and other environment conditions. Example if Kronus release an attack on sand you will see the dirt flying giving the foes a glint of the attack. Not to mention the shockwaves take the appearance of circles of concentrate wind{Like Picture }  .


MDC:


  • Tier 1:
    Completely Destroyed -Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
    Partially Destroyed -
    Lightly Damaged - Iron

  • Tier 2:
    Completely Destroyed -Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
    Partially Destroyed - Iron
    Lightly Damaged - Steel

    Tier 3:
    Completely Destroyed - Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
    Partially Destroyed -Steel
    Lightly Damaged -

    Tier 4:
    Completely Destroyed - Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
    Partially Destroyed -
    Lightly Damaged - Titanium

    Tier 5:
    Completely Destroyed - Titanium, Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
    Partially Destroyed -
    Lightly Damaged - Treasure Tree Adam

    Tier 6:
    Completely Destroyed - Titanium, Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
    Partially Destroyed - Treasure Tree Adam
    Lightly Damaged - Seastone

Notes:
Attribute Priorities:


*Primary Attribute: Speed
*Secondary Attribute: Perception
*Non-Prioritized Attributes:
Strength, and Durability




Tier 1 Skills:

Skill Name: Hasshoken  Quake
Tier: 1
Type Normal
Range: 10m
Speed: Self
Description:Kronus stomps his feet on the ground creating an vibrations all through ground. This shockwave is able to travel through water and cause waves{10meters length,5 meters height,  and 5 meters width}. Strong enough to destroy a really small portion of a town. The ground around the user begins to be completely destroyed ( this attack is 5 meters deep,5 meters in height, 5meters wide, and spread in the cone like fashion of 10 meters).  Although the ground directly below the user is safe from harm. The damage of this attack can break bones of anyone who is near this attack as well as send them back 10 meters. If perform Just like any other shockwave being hit by an shockwave harm you in both internal , and external. The damage is follow the damage broken bones, and bruise organs which can lead to internal bleeding.

I'm only allowing this attack to travel through the ground, and through objects. for example if a tree is within the vicinity of the attack the vibrations would travel up it and cause damage.

Skill Name: Hasshoken Iron Body
Tier: 1
Type Defensive
Range: Self
Speed: Self
Description: Kronus is able to release a consist  shockwave through out his body. The shockwaves act as an shield that protect the user body form  physical  attacks .(Two attacks of the same tier, or one tier 2. )This defensive ability only work on those who make contact which him acting as an perfect shield . Those who clashes with this shield is subject to being harm by both internal , and external. The damage is follow the damage broken bones, and bruise organs which can lead to internal bleeding. He is able to move while using this technique.

Skill Name: Hasshoken Hit
Tier: 1
Type Normal
Range: Self
Speed: Self
Description: Kronus release an a  very powerful shockwave from any limb of his body. This shockwave move forward in the general direction of target{Whatever object or person he hits}. It can travel the length of 10 meters, 5m in height, and is 5 meters wide this attack is capable of both internal , and external. The damage is follow the damage broken bones, and bruise organs which can lead to internal bleeding.

contact with whatever you are hitting is needed.

Tier 2 Skills:

Skill Name: Hasshoken Iron Body Lv2
Tier: 2
Type Defensive
Range: Self
Speed: Self
Description:Kronus is able to release a consist  shockwave through out his body. The shockwaves act as an shield that protect the user body form  physical  attacks, and some elemental attacks  .(Two attacks of the same tier, one tier 3, and three tier ones. )This defensive ability only work on those who make contact which him acting as an perfect shield . Those who clashes with this shield is subject to being harm by both internal , and external. The damage is follow the damage broken bones, and bruise organs which can lead to internal bleeding. He is able to move while using this technique.



Skill Name: Hasshoken Hit Lv2
Tier: 2
Type Normal
Range: Self
Speed: 3
Description:Kronus release an a  very powerful shockwave from any limb of his body. This shockwave move forward in the general direction of target{Whatever object or person he hits}. It can travel the length of 18 meters, 7m in height, and is 7 meters wide this attack is capable of both internal , and external. The damage is follow the damage broken bones, and bruise organs which can lead to internal bleeding.


Skill Name: Hasshoken  Quake Lv2
Tier: 2
Type Normal
Range: 18m
Speed: Self
Description:Kronus stumps his feet on the ground. Creating vibrations all through it. Able to travel through water and cause waves. Strong enough to destroy a really small portion of a town. The ground around the user begins to be completely destroyed ( this attack is 8 meters deep, 8 meters tall, and spread in the diameter of 18 meters).  Although the ground directly below the user is safe from harm. The damage of this attack can break bones of anyone who is near this attack as well as send them back 18 meters. Just like any other shockwave being hit by an shockwave harm you in both internal , and external. The damage is follow the damage broken bones, and bruise organs which can lead to internal bleeding. This attacks get an additional 0.5 in the destruction chart.


same comments apply to these skills

Tier 3 Skills:

Skill Name: -
Tier: -
Type -
Range: -
Speed: -
Description: -

Skill Name: -
Tier: -
Type -
Range: -
Speed: -
Description: -

Tier 4 Skills:

Skill Name: -
Tier: -
Type -
Range: -
Speed: -
Description: -





7Hasshoken Unchain {Done} Empty Re: Hasshoken Unchain {Done} on Thu Dec 15, 2016 8:28 am

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Hasshoken Hit 
It already state contact it is even label self-.-

Shortwaves travel in water better. For an example drop a rock in the water or skip an rock. Then see how long the shortwaves travel. That is why it gets a +1 in water.

Yes I understand that shockwaves effect everything in the direct vicinity of the attack. Is this ready for an 1/2?

8Hasshoken Unchain {Done} Empty Re: Hasshoken Unchain {Done} on Thu Dec 15, 2016 8:32 am

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No it isn't ready for a 1/2 from me. There is no reason it deals more damage in water. Increased range is something I would allow though.

Hasshoken Quake: Put the note that it can't damage objects not connected to the ground.

9Hasshoken Unchain {Done} Empty Re: Hasshoken Unchain {Done} on Thu Dec 15, 2016 8:48 am

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Done anything else?

10Hasshoken Unchain {Done} Empty Re: Hasshoken Unchain {Done} on Thu Dec 15, 2016 8:50 am

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Yea I need to give you your 1/2

11Hasshoken Unchain {Done} Empty Re: Hasshoken Unchain {Done} on Thu Dec 15, 2016 9:35 am

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"Shockwaves"



The Crippler

Priority:Secondary
Fighting Style: Martial Art
Skill Set Name: Hasshoken
Skill Set Information:Hasshoken is a fighting style allows the user to control vibrations around their limbs to generate shock. This shock is powerful enough to destroy a metal shield or defeat a strong man easily. It is also claimed that these attacks are unblockable and reverberating, causing defenses to shatter. This fighting style can be utilized on any limb of the user's body, whether it be the head, fists, legs, or elbows.
Passives:

  • Shatter: One of Hasshoken is the ability  to shatter equipment same tier equipment .  Kronus is able to shatter or break Equipment made of materials the user can partially completely destroy breaks from one hit as opposed to three per the Equipment System. i.e. if Iron is completely destroyed or partially  at Tier 1, then a Tier 1 Skill would break an iron sword in one strike as opposed to three.


  • Breaker of Defense : Due to Kronus being an Hasshoken User.  An Hasshoken users are known for breaking or shattering  defense techniques.  Kronus had develop an passive which allow him to break same tier defense technique. i.e. if the defense technique is Tier 1, then a Tier 1 Skill would break the defense  technique regardless if it can withstand an tier 2 output.


  • Longer Range: Kronus have developed a natural ability which allows him to increase the range of his some of his techniques. How by simply adding more shockwaves to his attacks . He can extend the range of any of his shockwaves base abilities  by 10 meters in length, 5 meters in height, and  5 meters width. Unfortunately this cost him 15 stamina per technique use. Common sense applies to this technique.

    Hasshoken is circular waves, so most ranges should be a radius more than individual length, this works with your yuki because it can literally create unlimited snow. Lower the stamina cost to ten and just state the ranges can be extended by a five meter radius



Skillset Strengths:

  • All attacks attacks that is perform in water gets an +5m in all direction .

  • Kronus received  an +1 tier in the destruction chart when hitting equipment.

Skillset Weaknesses:

  • The skills of the set are untamed. Meaning that once used, it will affect anything within vicinity. So, foes and friends alike will be hit due to the vibrations and shocks.

  • Yes majority of the shockwaves are visible be can be seen by Haki, and other environment conditions. Example if Kronus release an attack on sand you will see the dirt flying giving the foes a glint of the attack. Not to mention the shockwaves take the appearance of circles of concentrate wind{Like Picture }  .


MDC:


  • Tier 1:
    Completely Destroyed -Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
    Partially Destroyed -
    Lightly Damaged - Iron

  • Tier 2:
    Completely Destroyed -Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
    Partially Destroyed - Iron
    Lightly Damaged - Steel

    Tier 3:
    Completely Destroyed - Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
    Partially Destroyed -Steel
    Lightly Damaged -

    Tier 4:
    Completely Destroyed - Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
    Partially Destroyed -
    Lightly Damaged - Titanium

    Tier 5:
    Completely Destroyed - Titanium, Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
    Partially Destroyed -
    Lightly Damaged - Treasure Tree Adam

    Tier 6:
    Completely Destroyed - Titanium, Steel, Iron, Wood, Stone, and similar materials.
    Partially Destroyed - Treasure Tree Adam
    Lightly Damaged - Seastone

Notes:

Attribute Priorities:


*Primary Attribute: Speed
*Secondary Attribute: Perception
*Non-Prioritized Attributes:
Strength, and Durability




Tier 1 Skills:

Skill Name: Hasshoken  Quake
Tier: 1
Type Normal
Range: 10m
Speed: Self
Description:Kronus stomps his feet on the ground creating an vibrations all through ground. This shockwave is able to travel through water and cause waves{10meters length,5 meters height,  and 5 meters width}. Strong enough to destroy a really small portion of a town. The ground around the user begins to be completely destroyed ( this attack is 5 meters deep,5 meters in height, 5meters wide, and spread in the cone like fashion of 10 meters).  Although the ground directly below the user is safe from harm. The damage of this attack can break bones of anyone who is near this attack as well as send them back 10 meters. If perform Just like any other shockwave being hit by an shockwave harm you in both internal , and external. The damage is follow the damage broken bones, and bruise organs which can lead to internal bleeding it can't damage objects not connected to the ground.But he can only what is in the direct vicinity of the shockwave technique.

Should be a set radius seeing as hasshoken is circular. So all you need to say is a ten meter radius with the stomp being the epicenter.

Skill Name: Hasshoken Iron Body
Tier: 1
Type Defensive
Range: Self
Speed: Self
Description: Kronus is able to release a consist  shockwave through out his body. The shockwaves act as an shield that protect the user body form  physical  attacks .(Two attacks of the same tier, or one tier 2. )This defensive ability only work on those who make contact which him acting as an perfect shield . Those who clashes with this shield is subject to being harm by both internal , and external. The damage is follow the damage broken bones, and bruise organs which can lead to internal bleeding. He is able to move while using this technique.

Skill Name: Hasshoken Hit
Tier: 1
Type Normal
Range: Self
Speed: Self
Description: Kronus release an a  very powerful shockwave from any limb of his body. This shockwave move forward in the general direction of target{Whatever object or person he hits}. It can travel the length of 10 meters, 5m in height, and is 5 meters wide this attack is capable of both internal , and external. The damage is follow the damage broken bones, and bruise organs which can lead to internal bleeding.

same as the first edit, if its circular it has a radius. So should just be ten meter radius.

Tier 2 Skills:

Skill Name: Hasshoken Iron Body Lv2
Tier: 2
Type Defensive
Range: Self
Speed: Self
Description:Kronus is able to release a consist  shockwave through out his body. The shockwaves act as an shield that protect the user body form  physical  attacks, and some elemental attacks  .(Two attacks of the same tier, one tier 3, and three tier ones. )This defensive ability only work on those who make contact which him acting as an perfect shield . Those who clashes with this shield is subject to being harm by both internal , and external. The damage is follow the damage broken bones, and bruise organs which can lead to internal bleeding. He is able to move while using this technique.



Skill Name: Hasshoken Hit Lv2
Tier: 2
Type Normal
Range: Self
Speed: 3
Description:Kronus release an a  very powerful shockwave from any limb of his body. This shockwave move forward in the general direction of target{Whatever object or person he hits}. It can travel the length of 18 meters, 7m in height, and is 7 meters wide this attack is capable of both internal , and external. The damage is follow the damage broken bones, and bruise organs which can lead to internal bleeding.

[color=red]how is the shockwave released, bearing in mind as seen Hasshokenrequires you to make contact with something, be it the ground a person etc. Again circular waves meaning a radius not a square.



Skill Name: Hasshoken  Quake Lv2
Tier: 2
Type Normal
Range: 18m
Speed: Self
Description:Kronus stumps his feet on the ground. Creating vibrations all through it. Able to travel through water and cause waves. Strong enough to destroy a really small portion of a town. The ground around the user begins to be completely destroyed ( this attack is 8 meters deep, 8 meters tall, and spread in the diameter of 18 meters).  Although the ground directly below the user is safe from harm. The damage of this attack can break bones of anyone who is near this attack as well as send them back 18 meters. Just like any other shockwave being hit by an shockwave harm you in both internal , and external. The damage is follow the damage broken bones, and bruise organs which can lead to internal bleeding. This attacks get an additional 0.5 in the destruction chart. This  can't damage objects not connected to the ground. But only what is in the direct vicinity of the shockwave technique.

Same, should be a set radius seeing as the attacks are circular waves given from what hasshoken has seen.

Tier 3 Skills:

Skill Name: -
Tier: -
Type -
Range: -
Speed: -
Description: -

Skill Name: -
Tier: -
Type -
Range: -
Speed: -
Description: -

Tier 4 Skills:

Skill Name: -
Tier: -
Type -
Range: -
Speed: -
Description: -





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