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1Carestia; The Blade of Famine Empty Carestia; The Blade of Famine on Tue Jun 27, 2017 4:47 pm

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Carestia; The Blade of Famine Cutmyp16

Equipment Name: The Sabre of The Black Horse | Carestia
Equipment Type: Sword | Sabre
Strength Requirement: 1
Equipment Description: Carestia is what Magnus calls a hybrid sword. The fundamental aspects of the sword give it the look of a cutlass and a rapier. But Magnus would classify the sword as a custom rapier. The overall length of Carestia is 48 inches with a blade of 42 inches and a blade width of 2 ½ inches. This gives Magnus’ creation a very unique look among cutlasses and Rapiers. The handle is the perfect size for Magnus to hold it in either hand comfortably, and the handle is much like a cutlass with a semi-thick handle. The guard is more like a rapier with a guard that covers the knuckles and fingers perfectly. The guard and handle are both pitch black with some gold line work done to give the guard and handle a unique looking appearance of dread. The actual blade of Carestia isn’t like a rapier at all, but the blade was given more of a cutlass appearance with a slightly curved tip at the end.
Attachments: (Link to the registered attachments that are attached to the weapon or a spoiler with their filled out template.)
Curse | Devil Fruit:

  • The Curse of Famine - Carestia’s Curse is based on one of the Four Horseman and their represented relic of destruction. Carestia is French for Famine, like The Black Horseman. Famine was written to have a set of relic scales that were used to weight out everything to see what lived and died within his famine. This sabre is gift with the appetite of Famine. The blade can consume all form of energies (Stamina and Such) & Abstract Energies (Memories & Personalities). Each of these appetites will be created in more detail skills that deal with the curse, but the downside to the curse is one that shouldn’t be taken lightly. The body will be affected by hunger and the need to feed the blade at all times. Carestia will whispers to him mentally to take the blade out and feed it. This mental connection with the Sabre is a lot alike the connection that The 13 Month Series have with their owners. Unless the blade is used every four posts, The curse will cause massive headaches that will decrease the wielders' perception by 1 tier. (An Addition Downside will be added when the Skills for this Curse are bought.)

Materials:

  • Metallic Alloy - ??????

    • The Alloy is extremely durable while being extremely light weight. The Durability is stronger than Titanium but still weaker than seastone. The color of the alloy is a dark black.


  • Gold Alloy - 250,000 Beli
  • Black Leather - 75,000 Beli

Units per Slot: 1
Experience: 0



Last edited by Magnus Dayne on Tue Jun 27, 2017 10:33 pm; edited 1 time in total

2Carestia; The Blade of Famine Empty Re: Carestia; The Blade of Famine on Tue Jun 27, 2017 6:40 pm

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Hrm I haven't been grading these curse weapons but I find this to be a little too strong for the actual downside.

I think you should limit it to just taking stamina or just taking memories/personality, not both.

OR

If you want both then make the downside a bit more concrete. Okay someone is hungry, what does that actually mean in RP terms? Can't someone just ignore the voice telling them to feed the blade?

3Carestia; The Blade of Famine Empty Re: Carestia; The Blade of Famine on Tue Jun 27, 2017 10:39 pm

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I gotcha Kin. The point of this weapon was to be a stand in until I can destroy it and recreate it as a 13 Month Series. I added in an actual drawback to prevent the wielder, myself, from just ignoring the blade. Also, The additional drawback that isn't written down yet differ from the two techniques that I will be creating for this blade. One technique will devour Stamina, corrupting it, and using it various attacks. The second will be about memories/personality devouring, and that drawback will simply be that the memories or personalities that are devours are injected into the mind of Magnus.

4Carestia; The Blade of Famine Empty Re: Carestia; The Blade of Famine on Wed Jun 28, 2017 2:18 pm

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hmmm, 1/2 whoever goes for 2/2 should use their own scrutiny when grading it and don't auto 2/2

5Carestia; The Blade of Famine Empty Re: Carestia; The Blade of Famine on Fri Jun 30, 2017 6:53 pm

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Bump..th

6Carestia; The Blade of Famine Empty Re: Carestia; The Blade of Famine on Sat Jul 01, 2017 5:44 am

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The curse is better because that's a real weakness.

The only thing I don't understand is the metal alloy thing. Did you make a new material or...?

7Carestia; The Blade of Famine Empty Re: Carestia; The Blade of Famine on Sat Jul 01, 2017 11:39 pm

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Yes, I am working on getting a technique approved that allows me to create Enhanced or Mystical metals. The metal can be priced and I can just add them into my Member Shop for prices and such. Very Happy

8Carestia; The Blade of Famine Empty Re: Carestia; The Blade of Famine on Sun Jul 02, 2017 1:22 pm

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Uhhh I guess I'll price this new metal at 2,500,000. Sort of a large range between Titanium and Seastone

2/2

Final price: 2,825,000

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