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1Jake Jake no Mi Empty Jake Jake no Mi on Sat Nov 04, 2017 6:09 pm

Celio

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Celio
Priority: Primary
Fighting Style: Devil Fruit
Skill Set Name: - Jake Jake no Mi
Skill Set Information:
The Jake Jake no Mi is a Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to become a jacket and be worn by others, which makes them a Jacket Human.

The Jake Jake no Mi's main strength is to allow the user to become a full-skin jacket that others can wear, humans or animals. The user can then control the wearer's body and gain their abilities, potentially increasing their strength. The user still maintains the ability to move and talk while turned into a jacket, but it is unknown if they can force anyone to wear the jacket against their will. Size difference between the user and wearer seems to be of no issue, as the user's size seems to accommodate for a wearer who is larger.
Passives:

  • (Lvl then Description)
  • (Lvl then Description)
  • (Lvl then Description)

(Link to purchase of passives)
Skillset Strengths:

  • User can use their jacket body to store items and people within themselves, by using their Fruit's powers to open their jacket body and bring things inside. She can store up to one person, or up to 3 objects, as long as they are together smaller than her and weigh less than her.
  • User can use their Jacket Human powers to hide others inside of them, allowing them to hide from those who would want to harm them.
  • Transforming into the jacket form greatly reduces the weight of the user, which can make their movement in the air slow down to a slow glide.

Skillset Weaknesses:

  • Inhaled substances affect the insides of the jacket body, and as such if Zarka gets poisoned, the person inside of her will be poisoned as well.
  • Zarka cannot bring in someone inside of her jacket body if they are unwilling or unconscious. If the person inside is knocked unconscious, then they automatically are sent out of Zarka's body.
  • Overuse of the power will cause the zipper on Zarka's body to jam up for a few hours, trapping whoever is inside of the zipper as well as preventing Zarka to turn out of her zipper form. In terms of posts, this would be around 4 posts.

Notes: When someone is inside of Zarka due to this ability, if the user is hit with a blunt attack, Zarka will use the person inside of her's durability alongsides her own durability. However, if Zarka is hit with a piercing or slashing attack, or by someone using Busoshoku Haki, then Zarka will have to use her own Durability Level. In addition, her other attributes will change depending on the levels of Strength and Agility of the person inside.
Attribute Priorities:

  • Primary Attribute: Speed
  • Secondary Attribute: Strength
  • Non-Prioritized Attributes: Durability, Perception


Tier 1 Skills:
Skill Name: - Jacket Clothesline
Tier: 1
Type - Normal
Range: - Contact
Speed: - Own
Description: - Zarka turns herself into a jacket and glides around her opponent, and as soon as she reaches her opponent, she hits her opponent with a clothesline maneuver, turning back to normal right before it hits for more force. If someone is inside of her, she will still be able to hit the opponent, but she will have to run at the opponent instead, and she will be using the force of the person inside of her as well as her own, increasing her power by 1 while slowing her speed by 1.

Skill Name: - Jacket Open
Tier: - 1
Type - N/A
Range: - Contact
Speed: - Own
Description: - Zarka turns into her jacket form and opens the zipper that forms on her body. After she activates this skill she can bring a person inside of her or store up to 3 items that together end up being smaller in both height and weight inside of her to keep safe. She can also store any of her dials or her weapon inside of herself using this technique. By itself this attack does nothing to harm the opponent, but with a person inside of her Zarka can do more maneuvers.

Skill Name: - Jacket Stomp
Tier: - 1
Type - Normal
Range: - Contact
Speed: - Own
Description: - Zarka jumps into the air using her jacket form's nimbleness to glide over the opponent, before turning back to normal and landing on the opponent. This will crush stone, but will only fracture bone.

Tier 2 Skills:

Skill Name: - Rarara Rambo - Basic Repeater
Tier: - 2
Type - Normal
Range: - Contact
Speed: - Own
Description: - Zarka gets advice from the person inside of her on how to replicate a certain move they know, before trying to repeat the move herself the best she can. With this move, she can copy a T1 or T2 Skill from the person inside of her as long as it is a contact move, and if it is T1, bring the skill up to T2 in power. If she has a grunt inside of her instead of a PC or NPC person, then the move copied is just a basic punch with power at around T2.

Skill Name: - Jacket Mace Fist
Tier: - 2
Type - Normal
Range: - Contact
Speed: - Own
Description: - Zarka runs up to the opponent and opens up her zipper while in jacket form, before opening her zipper and pulling out a mace, and then quickly raising it to hit the opponent. This is a good technique to surprise a opponent, and can break a jaw somewhat.

Skill Name: - Jacket Hover
Tier: - 2
Type - Speed
Range: - Self
Speed: - IV
Description: - Zarka uses her jacket body in conjunction with a Breath Dial to fill up her hollow jacket body with helium. This will allow her to float in the air for a few seconds at a fast speed, but eventually she will have to exhale the helium. When that happens, she will exhale all of it at once and turn back to normal.

Tier 3 Skills:

Skill Name: - Jacket Divert
Tier: - 3
Type - Defensive
Range: - Contact
Speed: - Own
Description: - Zarka opens up the zipper on her jacket body while someone is inside of her, as a attack comes at her, before trying to have the attack hit the person inside of her instead. This will divert the damage to the person inside of her instead of her, but if it is a blunt attack then the person inside of her can still use Zarka's durability. The person inside of her will have to be willing to be hurt in order to use this skill.

Skill Name: - Rarara Rambo - Clapperstorm
Tier: - 3
Type - Normal
Range: - Contact
Speed: - Own
Description: - Zarka rushes at the opponent with a person inside of her, before unleashing a powerful clap at the opponent. This attack uses both Zarka's and the person inside of her to unleash a clap that can break bones and iron onto the opponent's face.

Tier 4 Skills:

Skill Name: -
Tier: -
Type -
Range: -
Speed: -
Description: -

Skill Name: -
Tier: -
Type -
Range: -
Speed: -
Description: -

Tier 5 Skills:

Skill Name: -
Tier: -
Type -
Range: -
Speed: -
Description: -

Skill Name: -
Tier: -
Type -
Range: -
Speed: -
Description: -

Tier 6 Skills:

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Type -
Range: -
Speed: -
Description: -



Last edited by Celio on Mon Nov 06, 2017 3:43 pm; edited 5 times in total

2Jake Jake no Mi Empty Re: Jake Jake no Mi on Sat Nov 04, 2017 11:53 pm

Celio

Marines
Marines

Celio
Ok this DF is finished.

3Jake Jake no Mi Empty Re: Jake Jake no Mi on Mon Nov 06, 2017 6:41 am

Kincaid

Pirates
Pirates

Kincaid
@Celio wrote:Priority: Primary
Fighting Style: Devil Fruit
Skill Set Name: - Jake Jake no Mi
Skill Set Information:
The Jake Jake no Mi is a Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to become a jacket and be worn by others, which makes them a Jacket Human.

The Jake Jake no Mi's main strength is to allow the user to become a full-skin jacket that others can wear, humans or animals. The user can then control the wearer's body and gain their abilities, potentially increasing their strength. The user still maintains the ability to move and talk while turned into a jacket, but it is unknown if they can force anyone to wear the jacket against their will. Size difference between the user and wearer seems to be of no issue, as the user's size seems to accommodate for a wearer who is larger.
Passives:

  • (Lvl then Description)
  • (Lvl then Description)
  • (Lvl then Description)

(Link to purchase of passives)
Skillset Strengths:

  • User can use their jacket body to store items and people within themselves, by using their Fruit's powers to open their jacket body and bring things inside. Can you find evidence where this was used to store items? Otherwise it starts to go into the area of "hammer-space" fruit.
  • User can use their Jacket Human powers to hide others inside of them, allowing them to hide from those who would want to harm them.
  • Transforming into the jacket form greatly reduces the weight of the user, which can make their movement in the air slow down to a slow glide.

Skillset Weaknesses:

  • Inhaled substances affect the insides of the jacket body, and as such if Zarka gets poisoned, the person inside of her will be poisoned as well.
  • Bringing in someone who is unwilling to go inside of Zarka will require her to have a stronger will (Higher EP) to bring them in. This isn't a weakness, honestly it might be a passive because we don't know FOR SURE you can take over anyone unwillingly. Also I'd want to see this at needing 20% - 25% more EP than the target. (Target has 100,000 EP, you'd need 120-125,000 EP). I definitely want a second opinion on this though.
  • Overuse of the power will cause the zipper on Zarka's body to jam up for a few hours, trapping whoever is inside of the zipper as well as preventing Zarka to turn out of her zipper form. Put this in terms of posts, hours mean almost nothing in RP world.

Notes: When someone is inside of Zarka due to this ability, if the user is hit with a blunt attack, the person inside will use Zarka's Durability Level. However, if Zarka is hit with a piercing or slashing attack, or by someone using Busoshoku Haki, then the person inside will have to use their durability level.
Attribute Priorities:

  • Primary Attribute: Speed
  • Secondary Attribute: Strength
  • Non-Prioritized Attributes: Durability, Perception


Tier 1 Skills:
Skill Name: - Jacket Clothesline
Tier: 1
Type - Normal
Range: - Melee
Speed: - Own
Description: - Zarka turns herself into a jacket and uses her own now lightly weighting body to glide around the opponent before launching a clothesline technique on the opponent. This usually causes light fractures upon hitting the opponent. If someone is inside of her, then she won't I think you meant "will" here be unable to glide, but she still would be able to clothesline the opponent, albeit the attack will suffer a -1 Speed Penalty. I'm a little confused here. If you're a jacket your body is light enough to glide away but you can still deliver a powerful, fracturing, clothesline? Do you turn into your non-jacket form between gliding and attack?

Skill Name: - Jacket Open
Tier: - 1
Type - N/A
Range: - Contact
Speed: - Own
Description: - Zarka turns into her jacket form and opens the zipper that forms on her body. After she activates this skill she can bring a person inside of her or store some items inside of her to keep safe. She can also store any of her dials or her weapon inside of herself using this technique. By itself this attack does nothing to harm the opponent, but with a person inside of her Zarka can do more maneuvers. Again, need evidence of item storage from canon.

Skill Name: - Jacket Stomp
Tier: - 1
Type - Normal
Range: - Melee
Speed: - Own
Description: - Zarka jumps into the air using her jacket form's nimbleness to glide over the opponent, before turning back to normal and landing on the opponent. This will crush stone, but will only fracture bone.

Tier 2 Skills:

Skill Name: - Rarara Rambo - Basic Flurry
Tier: - 2
Type - Normal
Range: - Melee
Speed: - Own
Description: - Zarka runs up to the opponent while someone is inside of her, before using her full force to launch a flurry of punches at the opponent. Each punch can lightly fracture bones, but together the flurry of punches is enough to break stones and snap entire bones.

Skill Name: - Jacket Mace Fist
Tier: - 2
Type - Normal
Range: - Normal
Speed: - Own
Description: - Zarka runs up to the opponent and opens up her zipper while in jacket form, before opening her zipper and pulling out a mace, and then quickly raising it to hit the opponent. This is a good technique to surprise a opponent, and can break a jaw somewhat. [color=red]

Skill Name: - Jacket Hover
Tier: - 2
Type - Speed
Range: - Self
Speed: - IV
Description: - Zarka uses her jacket body in conjunction with a Breath Dial to fill up her hollow jacket body with helium. This will allow her to float in the air for a few seconds at a fast speed, but eventually she will have to exhale the helium. When that happens, she will exhale all of it at once and turn back to normal.

Tier 3 Skills:

Skill Name: - Jacket Divert
Tier: - 3
Type - Defensive
Range: - Melee
Speed: - Own
Description: - Zarka opens up the zipper on her jacket body while someone is inside of her, as a attack comes at her, before trying to have the attack hit the person inside of her instead. This will divert the damage to the person inside of her instead of her, but if it is a blunt attack then the person inside of her can still use Zarka's durability. The person inside of her will have to be willing to be hurt in order to use this skill.

Skill Name: - Rarara Rambo - Clapperstorm
Tier: - 3
Type - Normal
Range: - Melee This isn't a range.
Speed: - Own
Description: - Zarka rushes at the opponent with a person inside of her, before unleashing a powerful clap at the opponent. This attack uses both Zarka's and the person inside of her to unleash a clap that can break bones and iron. Does the clap create a shockwave or do you actually clap the person's body/head/whatever?

Tier 4 Skills:

Skill Name: -
Tier: -
Type -
Range: -
Speed: -
Description: -

Skill Name: -
Tier: -
Type -
Range: -
Speed: -
Description: -

Tier 5 Skills:

Skill Name: -
Tier: -
Type -
Range: -
Speed: -
Description: -

Skill Name: -
Tier: -
Type -
Range: -
Speed: -
Description: -

Tier 6 Skills:

Skill Name: -
Tier: -
Type -
Range: -
Speed: -
Description: -

This is just a general suggestion and I don't know your plans going forward but this is a wonderful utility fruit but you seem to be using it more as an odd offensive fruit. It's not that it can't be used that way, but I don't want you to miss out on the true power of the fruit. That being said I strongly suggest a passive or skill of some sort that allows you to combine the attributes of you and the person you're covering or boosts the attributes in some way. I don't fully know how this would look or to what degree it could be approved, but it's definitely something to consider if you haven't already.

4Jake Jake no Mi Empty Re: Jake Jake no Mi on Mon Nov 06, 2017 1:57 pm

Celio

Marines
Marines

Celio
Technically there is no hammerspace within the Jake Jake no Mi. Zarka's body when in the Jacket Form is hollow, so if she isn't using the space inside of herself to hold a person inside of herself she could probably use it to hold some items for if she needs any free hands. The maximum weight of things she could hold would probably equal her weight.

Edit: And also it actually makes physical sense that, since the jacket body is hollow, that it would make Zarka a much lighter person. This is what allows her to glide slightly, and in conjunction with with the fact above, she could use this and the Breath Dial to fly.

5Jake Jake no Mi Empty Re: Jake Jake no Mi on Mon Nov 06, 2017 4:11 pm

Celio

Marines
Marines

Celio
Well that's all of the changes I have made to fix the other mistakes, so you can look at it again alongsides the notes I left in the message above Kincaid.

6Jake Jake no Mi Empty Re: Jake Jake no Mi on Mon Nov 06, 2017 11:08 pm

Kincaid

Pirates
Pirates

Kincaid
Okay, as long as you're not saying you can store some absurd amount of items within yourself, that's logical and I'm fine with it.

As for the jacket body being hollow, I never had a problem with that fact and I'm sorry if it came across as if I did. I was just confused with your first skill because if you're light enough to glide you don't have the mass to deliver a powerful punch like that. However, you fixed that and now the skill totally makes sense so all good here.

1/2

7Jake Jake no Mi Empty Re: Jake Jake no Mi on Wed Nov 08, 2017 4:46 pm

Adri Sakna

Marines
Marines

Adri Sakna
@Celio wrote:Priority: Primary
Fighting Style: Devil Fruit
Skill Set Name: - Jake Jake no Mi
Skill Set Information:
The Jake Jake no Mi is a Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to become a jacket and be worn by others, which makes them a Jacket Human.

The Jake Jake no Mi's main strength is to allow the user to become a full-skin jacket that others can wear, humans or animals. The user can then control the wearer's body and gain their abilities, potentially increasing their strength. The user still maintains the ability to move and talk while turned into a jacket, but it is unknown if they can force anyone to wear the jacket against their will. Size difference between the user and wearer seems to be of no issue, as the user's size seems to accommodate for a wearer who is larger.
Passives:

  • (Lvl then Description)
  • (Lvl then Description)
  • (Lvl then Description)

(Link to purchase of passives)
Skillset Strengths:

  • User can use their jacket body to store items and people within themselves, by using their Fruit's powers to open their jacket body and bring things inside. She can store up to one person, or up to 3 objects, as long as they are together smaller than her and weigh less than her.
  • User can use their Jacket Human powers to hide others inside of them, allowing them to hide from those who would want to harm them.
  • Transforming into the jacket form greatly reduces the weight of the user, which can make their movement in the air slow down to a slow glide.

Skillset Weaknesses:

  • Inhaled substances affect the insides of the jacket body, and as such if Zarka gets poisoned, the person inside of her will be poisoned as well.
  • Zarka cannot bring in someone inside of her jacket body if they are unwilling or unconscious. If the person inside is knocked unconscious, then they automatically are sent out of Zarka's body. I say get rid of this as a weakness, and instead make a passive where you can, depending on how much EP the enemy has, can forcefully take over their body, though if you wanna keep it like this go ahead.
  • Overuse of the power will cause the zipper on Zarka's body to jam up for a few hours, trapping whoever is inside of the zipper as well as preventing Zarka to turn out of her zipper form. In terms of posts, this would be around 4 posts.

Notes: When someone is inside of Zarka due to this ability, if the user is hit with a blunt attack, Zarka will use the person inside of her's durability alongsides her own durability. However, if Zarka is hit with a piercing or slashing attack, or by someone using Busoshoku Haki, then Zarka will have to use her own Durability Level. In addition, her other attributes will change depending on the levels of Strength and Agility of the person inside.
Attribute Priorities:

  • Primary Attribute: Speed
  • Secondary Attribute: Strength
  • Non-Prioritized Attributes: Durability, Perception


Tier 1 Skills:
Skill Name: - Jacket Clothesline
Tier: 1
Type - Normal
Range: - Contact
Speed: - Own
Description: - Zarka turns herself into a jacket and glides around her opponent, and as soon as she reaches her opponent, she hits her opponent with a clothesline maneuver, turning back to normal right before it hits for more force. If someone is inside of her, she will still be able to hit the opponent, but she will have to run at the opponent instead, and she will be using the force of the person inside of her as well as her own, increasing her power by 1 while slowing her speed by 1.

Skill Name: - Jacket Open
Tier: - 1
Type - N/A
Range: - Contact
Speed: - Own
Description: - Zarka turns into her jacket form and opens the zipper that forms on her body. After she activates this skill she can bring a person inside of her or store up to 3 items that together end up being smaller in both height and weight inside of her to keep safe. She can also store any of her dials or her weapon inside of herself using this technique. By itself this attack does nothing to harm the opponent, but with a person inside of her Zarka can do more maneuvers.

Skill Name: - Jacket Stomp
Tier: - 1
Type - Normal
Range: - Contact
Speed: - Own
Description: - Zarka jumps into the air using her jacket form's nimbleness to glide over the opponent, before turning back to normal and landing on the opponent. This will crush stone, but will only fracture bone.

Tier 2 Skills:

Skill Name: - Rarara Rambo - Basic Repeater
Tier: - 2
Type - Normal
Range: - Contact
Speed: - Own
Description: - Zarka gets advice from the person inside of her on how to replicate a certain move they know, before trying to repeat the move herself the best she can. With this move, she can copy a T1 or T2 Skill from the person inside of her as long as it is a contact move, and if it is T1, bring the skill up to T2 in power. If she has a grunt inside of her instead of a PC or NPC person, then the move copied is just a basic punch with power at around T2.

Skill Name: - Jacket Mace Fist
Tier: - 2
Type - Normal
Range: - Contact
Speed: - Own
Description: - Zarka runs up to the opponent and opens up her zipper while in jacket form, before opening her zipper and pulling out a mace, and then quickly raising it to hit the opponent. This is a good technique to surprise a opponent, and can break a jaw somewhat.

Skill Name: - Jacket Hover
Tier: - 2
Type - Speed
Range: - Self
Speed: - IV
Description: - Zarka uses her jacket body in conjunction with a Breath Dial to fill up her hollow jacket body with helium. This will allow her to float in the air for a few seconds at a fast speed, but eventually she will have to exhale the helium. When that happens, she will exhale all of it at once and turn back to normal.

Tier 3 Skills:

Skill Name: - Jacket Divert
Tier: - 3
Type - Defensive
Range: - Contact
Speed: - Own
Description: - Zarka opens up the zipper on her jacket body while someone is inside of her, as a attack comes at her, before trying to have the attack hit the person inside of her instead. This will divert the damage to the person inside of her instead of her, but if it is a blunt attack then the person inside of her can still use Zarka's durability. The person inside of her will have to be willing to be hurt in order to use this skill.

Skill Name: - Rarara Rambo - Clapperstorm
Tier: - 3
Type - Normal
Range: - Contact
Speed: - Own
Description: - Zarka rushes at the opponent with a person inside of her, before unleashing a powerful clap at the opponent. This attack uses both Zarka's and the person inside of her to unleash a clap that can break bones and iron onto the opponent's face.

Tier 4 Skills:

Skill Name: -
Tier: -
Type -
Range: -
Speed: -
Description: -

Skill Name: -
Tier: -
Type -
Range: -
Speed: -
Description: -

Tier 5 Skills:

Skill Name: -
Tier: -
Type -
Range: -
Speed: -
Description: -

Skill Name: -
Tier: -
Type -
Range: -
Speed: -
Description: -

Tier 6 Skills:

Skill Name: -
Tier: -
Type -
Range: -
Speed: -
Description: -

Ima going to 2/2 you unless you wanna change the weakness like I said, but if you don't want to then go ahead and have the 2/2


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8Jake Jake no Mi Empty Re: Jake Jake no Mi on Wed Nov 08, 2017 4:48 pm

Celio

Marines
Marines

Celio
I'll have the 2/2.

9Jake Jake no Mi Empty Re: Jake Jake no Mi on Wed Nov 08, 2017 4:58 pm

Adri Sakna

Marines
Marines

Adri Sakna
Take your 2/2 then


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