"Lets see... "Commander Steele was temporarily assigned along with his entire battlation to investigate a couple of murders within Briss Kingdom. His father a nobleman much like himself , and his Superior Captain John had requested personal that he found out who the fuck was killing local marines.

The first incident was along the ports of Briss Kingdom which he had headed first. His 45 grunts had sealed off the area prior to burning marine vessel which they ultimately stop from burning completely. They had recover some bodies with cuts along them which was a unpleasant sight to see. Commander Steele had talk to several witnesses along the port each describing a little lady who always seen fishing near the port or taking notes. I guess you can say she was a local in the area she more then likely can tell us what happen.

After a few hours Commander Steele had decided to move on to the local bar were Jack had owned. His entire battalion had closed down the bar,and the road block it too. Just a couple days ago a young lady spotted two marines dead, and to his understanding it was the same woman who was always fucking fishing. Commander Steele had a cold feeling about this young lady she was at every scene prior to a marine death. Commander Steele had question the owner Jack about the young lady not out of suspicion but curious in all reality Commander Steele had his suspected, and it was her.

Commander Steele , and his grunts exited out bar as they swarm together heading for Briss Kingdom Marine OutPost.

~Exited~
Suspected Blake

1. Be more descriptive. Its an investigation, this will not pass. You need to give proper detail.
2. You can't change whats happened. The fire burns and the vessel is completely burned down. You can't halt anything about that.
3. You can't be in the timeline of the ship burning. Thats just impossible bruh.
4. Theres literally not a single bit of proper investigation that would allow you the ability to even seem vaguely aware of Blake. All I get from this is theres a girl who likes to fish and take notes. No story, no proper back up to the investigation, nothing. Currently the status of this investigation is Denied.

-suggestion-

I would suggest going back and properly familiarizing yourself with the tasks that your trying to get Blakes character for, give significant detail that would properly join Blakes character to the crime. Give actual detail, think of the police officers who gather evidence think of what they do. Right now your messing with Blakes timeline which is the main reason for the investigation denial. Gong through her tasks would be an advantage and nailing the detail is the key to the investigation.

You should also be entering/investigating the final topic Blake has ic done and not suddenly appearing through the middle of one. That is complete manipulation of Blakes timeline on a thread thats not here and is not allowed. IF you wish to "jump" in to the timeline then the investigation should be happening in the same thread that Blakes last completed task in Briss was completed in. Not 1 or two tasks prior.