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1Put in Work [Training Topic]  Empty Put in Work [Training Topic] on Sun May 29, 2016 11:52 am

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The sun was high in the air, as its rays stretched across the waters of the West Blue. Raphael had isolated himself on a unnamed island in these very waters. Only his crew knew which island the man was on in the vast space know as the West Blue. Where was the golden eyed man on this island exactly? Well, he was doing what he did best which was sleeping in a interesting place. Somehow he had managed to climb into a lone palm tree that was on the beach. He had climbed up here to enjoy the warmth of the sun more and ended up falling asleep. The tree was oddly enough comfortable to the pirate; he did find most things comfortable though. "Captain, you'll get sun burn if you remain up there." Von said with his head up looking towards the top of the Raphael's resting spot.

Raphael remained still and with closed eyes replied to his crews resident scientist. "You see this melanin? We don't burn easy." Von chuckled at Raphael's reply. The scientist returned his head to its normal position and adjusted his glasses. "I suppose you're right Captain, but it's still quite possible." Raphael let out a loud sigh before sitting up. "Why do you always do this..." Raphael was obviously agitated with Von by the tone in his voice. "Because I have your best interest in mind my glorious leader." Von had thrown his arms into the air dramatically. Raphael at the point had learned from his perch and was looking at Von. He looked at the pink haired man with a stale expression. Raphael sighed again before sitting completely up. "I don't understand you sometimes." Von smiled and brought his hands back to his side. "Then that means our enemies won't understand me in the slightest." Raphael blink a few times. "I guess you're right."

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2Put in Work [Training Topic]  Empty Re: Put in Work [Training Topic] on Sun May 29, 2016 2:25 pm

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Byron was still recuperating from the events of what exactly occurs when you escape the clutchs of a bunch of goddamn psychopaths with Sandra. So Sandra, tell me something.He offered torwards her as a sort of question. Yes?The fishwoman turned her head over to Byron, intently listening to what he had to say. What exactly do you intend to do with your life...?Now that you are free from those..."People".The fishwoman took the time to contemplate his words... Honestly I mean, the choice is yours to deal with. I think I'll go back to pursuing my goal you see...One day...I want to find the all blue!and swim in that damn ocean!No matter who tries to stop me!

Sandra would look cocky for a minute and different from her usual demeanor, proud and triumphant in contrast to cold and analyatical, more full of emotion clearly before going back to her old act. Ah...Sorry about that, but yes. That is what I intend to do.Though...I think I will stick around with you. You don't seem bad, and we're kind of on the same page you know?
Huh, so they really were. Huh, I guess we are then. I personally plan on going into the Grand Line myself sooner or later, so perhaps you could come with me and we can sort that out.Before the two could further resume their conversation however, Byron would notice Raphael.

Oh hello Raphael.What exactly are you doing around here still?Also who is your friend?While Byron seemed to be rather amicable, Sandra on the other hand was rather iffy about the entire ordeal and was on guard against the two.Relax. Their not exactly hostile or anything.At Byron's insistence, Sandra herself lowered her guard, but only a bit anyway. If you say so...

3Put in Work [Training Topic]  Empty Re: Put in Work [Training Topic] on Tue May 31, 2016 3:03 am

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The two men would grow silent for a minute, but just as the silence encroached the me it dispersed. This was because footsteps trotting through the sand broke the silence. Von quickly shifted his attention into the direction of the noise. He demeanor became serious as he shifted his glasses to a more suitable position. "It appears we have company captain." Where Von had become tense, Raphael felt unbothered by what could be a approaching enemy. When the footsteps were replaced with a voice Raphael, who had been facing the opposite direction, looked over his shoulder while angling his body to look down to the ground. "It's ok Von." After Raphael calmed Von the pink haired man relaxed himself. He shifted his arms so that his left would come across his body horizontally, while his right hand would rest stop his left vertically.

"I could ask you the same thing Byron. It's been awhile." Raphael stood and placed both hands inside his shorts pockets. Taking a single step he quickly found himself in the air, jumping from his "nest". When he landed Raphael bent his knees to cushion the impact from jumping from that height. "This is Von Jaeger. He's a new member of my crew." Raphael shifted his body to stand comfortably. "Pleasure to make your acquaintance." Von bowed slightly to the two newcomers. "If you've come all this way I can only assume it's for a reason." The golden eyed of Raphael scanned the woman standing before him. "Hmm? So who is she." Raphael asked tilting his head to the side. "I assume it has something to do with her as well." Even though he did not seem like it was truly a insightful young man.

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4Put in Work [Training Topic]  Empty Re: Put in Work [Training Topic] on Wed Jun 08, 2016 5:40 pm

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Well it seemed everyone was going to calm down now and actually not try to kill each other. Fantastic, I guess you could say that haha, as for my own business here however... I don't have much of a reason for being here actually. Byron really was...Not exactly in it right now, he had just wandered the area and happened to stumble across Raphael in the general vicinity. Meanwhile Sandra however took some degree of interest in Raphael, carefully surveying him with her eyes. Hm. I am here simply on my own accord. Byron over here happened to help me out, so I am simply accompanying him for now. You though....Sandra would carefully look into Raphael's eyes. As if looking for something right now, something only she could see that the others couldn't. Just looking at you. it's as if I'm looking into the eyes of a tiger. Like someone who has that presence...That stands out differently from others. Has anyone else ever said this to you? You look like a fighter clearly as well, what is your style?Sandra had taken some degree of interest in Raphael now peculiarly. Meanwhile Byron remained in different. Well it is nice to meet you guys again. So Raphael, do you have any plans as of now? Anything spectacular hmmmmm?Byron said with an amused tone rather curious about him.

5Put in Work [Training Topic]  Empty Re: Put in Work [Training Topic] on Wed Jun 08, 2016 7:19 pm

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Raphael stared blankly as Sandra spoke, although he wasn't so rude as to ignore the friend of his friend. The two locked eyes, Raphael found a strange sense of tranquility in her eyes. It reminded him of the waves in the ocean. When she spoke he snapped back to their conversation mentally. Raphael had to think about her question for a few moments. "I remember words similar to those from my foster Father. He told me I have truly fearless eyes. The eyes of a predator." Raphael shrugged as Sandra continued. "Well I was never taught a formal fighting styled. I basically was forced to teach myself how to fight. The only thing I was taught was how to throw a punch." Von remained silent and lowered his head. The pink haired man adjusted his glasses, smiling at the words of his captain.

"I wouldn't call it spectacular, but I started my own crew and we're heading to the grand line soon." Raphael became silent for a split second. "Actually join my crew Byron." The words of Raphael were more of a demand, but question. He didn't mean any harm, but he had seen Byrons Talents before and knew what he could bring to the crew. "Of course the invitation is extended to your friend as well." The face of Raphael had a look of seriousness. Even though he really did want them to join; he could only express it through a air of complete business. Raphael lifted his arm and point his thumb over his shoulder to Von. "He's actually a part of my crew. He's a scientist who attacked me trying to test his creations." Von chuckled. "That's all in the past dear captain. "However like that woman says. Their is something about you. Something in your soul only that your eyes can show."

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6Put in Work [Training Topic]  Empty Re: Put in Work [Training Topic] on Thu Jun 09, 2016 5:22 pm

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The Eyes of a Predator huh? I will admit, I can see something similar in your eyes yes.the fishwoman said as she stared carefully at Raphael, listening to what he had to say. While Byron would interject himself. I can't say I disagree, Raphael!You have such fear injecting eyes!The okama said in his usual flamboyant tone as a sort of jest at the young man. Then came his sudden offer towards Byron though. Oh My Raphael!Are you going to ask me out as well!!The okama would falsely blush and put his hands to his cheeks in a sort of shocked expression with his mouth agape in a rather comical manner. I didn't know predators made such quick advances Sandra!The fishwoman would laugh a bit at how ridiculous Byron was being right now, before resuming her previous demeanor. Ignoring what your...Friend here has to say. What I'm saying is, I think you have some form of potential, Raphael. As for joining your crew. I will leave that decision to Byron over here.Sandra would gesture over to the okama. So Byron. What do you think?As for Byron though...He was a little lost in his own unusually strange thoughts, before he had finally made up his mind.

How could I possible say no to a guy making such sudden advances!!!Byron would flip his hand around before pointing his index finger in the air and striking some kind of spectacular pose. Something that was rather trademark to the usual flamboyant okamas with how they were. Now that Byron was not a suppressed individual who was as cowardly as he used to be, the man was now more open with his nature. Hm Hm HM!!!! Everything in this blue has been...how do you say it. So boring! Wee wee yes.Speaking in a mock french accent nearly, the man continued. I shall accompany you into the grand-line. Simply for the hell of it! After all, I'd have to see more of you to really trust you as a "captain" though.Sandra would sigh at Byrons rather flamboyant and out there nature before continuing her own little talk. Er...Um...I think that's a yes....?Back to what I was saying though. Let me...Show you something, Raphael. Everybody step back.

Byron would then begin to move back a few meters in order to provide the proper room. Oh my Sandra San!Don't blow us away now!This was clearly the signal for everyone else to back up, as the okama knew whenever Sandra was going to pull out some big shit, the woman was rather damn serious. There would definitely  be enough time for Buddha and Von to back up before she did what she was going to do.I want you to watch what I'm doing very carefully, alright?The woman would prepare herself, as the woman would turn away from the three, and punch very carefully using a special technique at a group of trees that were only a few meters away from the duo. At first, it looked like a simple punch. However in reality, the trees began to distort, before being nearly torn apart by the raw force of something strange, unusual. Like a giant shockwave nearly!You saw that Raphael?Before the woman could continue though, Byron interjected. My My My Sandraaaaaaaa!!!! Those trees are gonna bite you in the ass one day!Ignoring the okama, Sandra continued what she was saying, but couldn't resist snickering at how utterly retarded Byron seemed to sound sometimes to her.

Alright. I want you to try to do what I did now, @Raphael. I want you to feel yourself get in sync with the very vapors around you. There's water everywhere around you @Raphael, especially with the water vapor in the air. What I just used was a technique from the fighting style known as Fishman Karate, and I believe you have the potential to use something like this well. We don't normally teach something this deadly to outsiders, so consider yourself "special".

Alright. Now try it!Get your body in sync with the very vapor around you!The water in the air and try to punch forward. If you do it right. Something will start to come out, it's ok to mess up given how advanced this kind of was.
Sandra had now stepped back a bit, this was the signal for Raphael to attempt this technique right now. How he would go about it was unknown.

Skill Used:
Tier 2 Skill Name:Ripple Punch
Tier 2 Skill Type:H2H
Tier 2 Skill Range:12 Meters
Tier 2 Skill Cooldown&Duration:4/Instant
Tier 2 Skill Description:Sandra punches the air in front of her, appearing almost like an attack of any kind did not happen and like she just "punched the air" in reality though, this move had sent the water vapor in the air forward. Causing in a large wave of about 12 meters of water vapor to burst at whatever is in front of her with a large shockwave dishing out Tier 2 Damage to the target's bodies according to her tier chart along with internal damage and knocking them back about 8 meters.

Ooc Note:Buddha nows your time to get the wordcount.

7Put in Work [Training Topic]  Empty Re: Put in Work [Training Topic] on Fri Jun 10, 2016 11:23 am

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Raphael ignored Byron's actions and returned them with a bland stare. Raphael's interest became peaked the more Sandra began to talk. "Potential huh?" Von himself couldn't have put the words any better. He had the same thoughts of Raphael. That's why he had asked the boy to join his crew. He wanted to see just how far Raphael could go. Raphael and Von both stared at Byron with a blank expression as he answered Raphael's invitation. He however was happy to hear that the two would be joining his crew. Raphael and Von both stood back, putting a good amount of distance between themselves and Sandra. He took note of Byron's words to Sandra. The golden eyed pirate became even more interested in what the woman wanted to show him by this point.

Raphael focused on Sandra's words himself; his eyes trained on her movements. Raphael was staring like a predator analyzing their prey. He gave off a aura that made Von take a step back from him. Raphael hadn't even noticed Von take those steps back. Sandra swung. Nothing happened, or at least that's how it appeared. Not much after she had swung the trees that she had aimed at warped and were torn completely apart. Raphael listened intently as Sandra explained the techniques mechanics. However, it was up to Raphael to execute the attack correctly.  Raphael began stretching his arms as he stepped forward. "Fishman Karate huh? So that's what it was about you. You're a fishman." Raphael brought his arms up above his head, while taking a deep breath in. He lowered them slowly exhaling his breath while he was at it.

"I was told about your people and their fighting capabilities. I've long to meet one of you and learn this." Raphael shifted his body into a offensive stance. He closed his eyes and began breathing slowly through his nostrils. Sandra's instructions replayed in his mind. "Sync with the Vapors around me..." Raphael calmed his mind and body. He became truly zen, but could not feel the vapors. Suddenly advice from his pseudo father came to his mind. "Visualization is key in any form of training." Raphael began to visual that it was raining. The rain suddenly froze in place; the rain drops began more clear. They became smaller and smaller eventually multiplying and becoming what looked like waves of water floating around Raphael.  He was halfway there and had only seen the attack once.

Now the hard part. Well maybe it wouldn't be so hard. All he had to do was catch the "wavelength" of the water and he could easily preform the attack. Raphael reached his hands out and brought them back close to his body. He then began to move his arms and body in fluid motions. He looked as his he was wading through water, or rather shifting the water around him through the air. He stopped and brought his arms back down to his side before putting is hands out to each side of him, and in front of him. He dug his feet into the sand before shifting back to his offensive stance. Raphael's eyes snapped open as he sent his right fist flying straight, towards a group of tree besides the ones that Sandra had mowed down. At first nothing happened, but Raphael could see it. The water had indeed moved.

A split second later the tree he had aimed at warped and exploded. His attack only affected two of the 5 trees he had aimed at. Meaning that he wasn't quite there yet. Raphael acrobatically began punching and kicking at the air. He was trying to get his body used to moving the vapors around him. The each swing of his limb the attack began to get stronger and stronger. Raphael held out his palm. Raphael began thrusting it through the air. After moments of nothingness the trees began began exploding one after another. It looks like he had caught on pretty fast. Von clasped his hands together and smiled. "Excellent Captain. Simply Excellent." Von's words were mumbled and to himself. Raphael turned to Sandra.

The young man gripped his fist and looked at it. He then looked back to Sandra with a sort of gleam in his eyes. She had helped Raphael's fighting style become complete with him learning fishman karate. He could feel it, the vapors, all around him. He hadn't noticed them before so he felt strange. Von adjusted his glasses. He wanted to test Raphael's new found power. "Practice makes perfect Captain." As those words left his mouth Von was swinging his sheathed weapon at Raphael.  Raphael wasn't facing Von, but he felt the man coming. Raphael stepped to the side to avoid Von's vertical strike. Raphael jumped back to put distance between them. Raphael immediately began punching the air in front of him. Again nothing appeared to be happening, but Von, who defended himself using his weapon, was sent flying.

Just from the force of the attack Von's body went tumbling across the sand. He stuck the sheath of his weapon into the ground to catch his balance. He could only rise to one knee for a moment. Von visibly looked as if he was out of breath; he was breathing extremely hard. "Quite...the...punch...you've...got." Von used his weapon in order to stand. "That fighting style fits you rather well captain." Von said while walking back towards Raphael, Byron, and Sandra. "You had such raw fighting power, so the fact that you picked this up as quickly as you did. Shouldn't be a surprise to you." Von's entire body ached from just that one attack, but he didn't say anything about it. It wasn't anything he couldn't handle. Raphael looked back towards Sandra and Byron. "Sandra Please teach me everything that you can. For some reason this style just feels comfortable to me." Raphael looked down at his hands once again and then back to Sandra. "I want to learn more about Fishman Karate."

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8Put in Work [Training Topic]  Empty Re: Put in Work [Training Topic] on Sat Jun 11, 2016 8:42 am

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Raphael!!!!!!~~~Be careful with that!~Byron called out in a singsong voice as his friend was training, almost like a mother watching over their son or some other shit like that. Hm alright, I wonder how you will do on this. I trust that you will succeed.The fishwoman said while evaluating What Raphael was doing, Byron on the other hand simply pranced around gleefully and wishfully. Huh...It seems he's actually starting to get it... I wonder what other bold moves this guy has in store for us yessireeeee!~!!!Byron said in a rather cheerful voice as he continued to watch Raphael train, rather amazed at his way of picking up the style.

Upon watching the sudden blowback Raphael threw at his companion though, Byron was rather shocked. WHAATATATATTAT,-WHAFAFAFAFA-The Okama was stammering like hell just watching what Raphael had just pulled off.

WHAAAAAAAATTTTTT!!!!!?!?!?!?

The okama grasped his face in a rather comedic shocked expression, looking at Raphael almost as if he was some form of alien in a good way. He figured it out!So quickly too!Byron was certainly rather impressed at his friends new found feat, while Sandra would simply smirk. There is nothing else for me to teach you right now, you must find your own way, and come up with your own style simply. I am rather amazed you figured it out so quickly however.

Wow Raphael!You really did it!Sooooo what are we doing now?

9Put in Work [Training Topic]  Empty Re: Put in Work [Training Topic] on Mon Jun 13, 2016 12:45 am

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Raphael held his fist in the air; it was up to about his chest. The stared at Sandra. A look of excitement in his eyes, even though his face remained calm. "I'll create something that no human has before." Raphael clenched his fist and looked down at it. The same look of excitement trained now on his hand. Von grinned at the words of Raphael. This was why he stuck by Raphael. The young pirate always seemed to surpass everyone's expectations. He had the true talent to reach great heights. All he needed was to be pushed. "Well Byron. First things first. We need to get the whole crew together." Raphael looked back at Von. "Mind giving us a ride back to Yotsuba. Oh! I have a ship also. It should be docked in Yotsuba by now." Von bowed his head to Sandra and Byron. "It's a pleasure to meet new members of our Captains family." He paused and stood back up straight. "A ride you greatly be appreciated."

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